今天,我們學校旅行,老師帶我們到The Peak玩。
我們玩足球,羽毛球,很開心。到了下午我們燒烤,大家把垃圾掉下地上。老師叫我們馬上把垃圾執起來。
Today is our picnic day, the teacher bring us to The Peak.
We played soccer & badminton, we were happy. In the afternoon, we had BBQ, many people threw the rubbish on the ground and the teacher asked us to pick them up at once.
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2008-01-29 16:25:35 補充:
第二段第一.二句可改為:We played soccer and badminton happily together.