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1 There have many reasons why you should not
2 smoke.The first is the harm smoking can do for
3 you healthy.The effects are both short-and long-term.
4 Tn the short term you will be less fttness and
5 easily become breathlessness when you run. Tn the
6 long term, your heart will damaged and your lungs
7 will become useless.Less serious, but still important
8 is the cost of smoking.Cigarettes prices are
9 expensive, and you will waste of your money. .
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2008-01-27 8:33 pm
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2008-01-27 9:00 pm
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1 There ARE many reasons why you should not.2 smoke. The first is the harm smoking can do TO
3 you HEALTH. The effects are both short- and long-term.
4 fitness--> FIT
5 breathlessness--> breathless
6 will BE damaged
7 serious--> seriously
8 Cigarettes -->Cigarette
9 delete OF
2008-01-27 9:08 pm
1. have - are
2. the harm smoking - the harm of smoking
3. short- - short-term
4. tn - in
fttness - fitness
less - lessening
5. easily become breathlessness - become breathlessness easily
6. will - will damage
7. serious - seriousness
8. prices - price
9. of - on
2. the harm smoking - the harm of smoking
3. short- - short-term
4. tn - in
fttness - fitness
less - lessening
5. easily become breathlessness - become breathlessness easily
6. will - will damage
7. serious - seriousness
8. prices - price
9. of - on
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