希望請我check 下呢幾句的gammar .....thx!!

我希望我可以更加感謝JAME....
我可以遇上他, 我可以愛上他, 那些我們能夠在一起的日子
I wonder I would have been more grateful for Jame that I would meet him, that I would like him and the days that we would stay together.

我想跟當時的自己說" 更加珍惜, 更加感謝這一段關係" , 可是對當時的我來說一定是沒用的
Although I wanted to deliver “be more precious and more thankful”to me at that time, it must be useless.

如果這件事沒有發生, 我不會注意到
If it did not happen, I would not have notice it.

件事係7年前發生, 咁個jame 已經死左la~~個女主角就好後悔la~~~

希望有人可以幫我check 下la~~~thx~~