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If you think you don't have enough pocket money, try to discuss your feelings with them. Or you nned to save your pocket money by yourself.
That's my solution. If you need the help, please tell me on the telephone.

Bye for now.
Yours,
Lee Hiu Ling
P.s : My telephone number: 2222222
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If you think you don't have enough pocket money, trying to share (feelings唔會用discuss的)your feelings with them. Or you need (串錯字，我想你手快，打錯)to 其實你應該寫"you should save...而唔係need to save"save your pocket money by yourself.
That's my suggestion.(如果用solution，外國人，會唔明。你現在作的文，應是那人想叫你給意見。 如果你用solution，會有人地迫你給意見的意思。)If you need help, please call me on phone by 2222222.

Bye for now.
Yours,
Lee Hiu Ling

If you think you don't have enough pocket money, you should try to discuss your feelings with them, or save your pocket money by yourself.
That's my solution. If you need help, please call me on the telephone.

see you..

Yours,
Lee Hiu Ling
P.s : My telephone number: 2222222