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2008-01-18 5:03 pm
Just difficultly finished the exam, when i'm waiting the result in worry then the next course also will start at tomorrow. Anyway the schedule satisfy the need of me because i'm hungry on the knowledge.
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2008-01-18 5:17 pm
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Hardly finished the exam, while I am waiting for my result, the next course is going to be started tomorrow.困難地完成考試，當我正在等我的成績，另一科將會在明天開始。
However, this schedule just suit me as I am hungry for learning.
可是，這個時間表很適合我，因為我渴望學習。
waiting通常會跟for
then不會跟when一起，就於because同so不會一起
hungry應該會跟for
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2008-01-20 2:57 am
Having taken a hard exam/After a hard exam, I am anxiously waiting for not only the result but also tomorrow's exam for another subject/course.
Anyway the exam schedule can be satisfied because I am hungry for learning/for getting knowledge.
Hope this helps!
Anyway the exam schedule can be satisfied because I am hungry for learning/for getting knowledge.
Hope this helps!
2008-01-18 6:03 pm
Just finished the exam difficultly. When I am waiting for the result worriedly, the next course will be started on tomorrow. Anyway, the schedule to be satisfied what I need because I am hungry for getting knowledge.
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