The Uncontrollable?

I'm still trying to figure out if you're wanting to rhyme or not?

Good topic. I like the title.

I don't understand the last line at all seeing as how the people never mention believing in something that isn't true. I don't think it's truth they fear, it's the idea of losing control of their own bodies and wish to be far away from you.

I'm not sure why you would be telling yourself that you are fine. Maybe that line is trying too hard to rhyme with the second line?

Suggestion to 2nd half:

It is your body no more
Now your mind they freely explore
Taking away your self-control
They play with you like a stuffed doll

These ghosts and ghouls are unperceived
To those who shut it out, refuse to believe
The people act like they can't hear
Until they see your eyes filled with fear

Afraid, shaken and confused by you
They choose to run from the truth
Are we not the masters? asks the ghoul
Let's convince that disbelieving fool.

Yes, somethings still can happend with uncontolled

I genuinly liked it, very good, nice metaphor, good structure. That's my opinion for all it's worth (not much that is).
Anyway, here's my own poem, do consider reading it:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080112205945AAKgZf9&pa=FYd1D2bwHTHzJLpkFOo4SUL0iLlr8jgOmJzW9x_oRhk_l2MsXXZvVL3Gu5CxYUy8eru32eoNex9wHA--&paid=asked&msgr_status=

The truth? The truth? You can't handle the truth!
Ignore me, I just had to say that.
And I didn't even see that movie.
Ghosts are creepy.
I don't know what ghouls are.
Uncontrollable?
I like to think that I'm always in control.

thanks!