About the English grammer of this letter

扶林

2008-01-13 3:46 am

Dear x x x

I am so glad to know you, my name is x x x.
The nest month we have a long vacation, because there is Chinese New Year, you can visit us anytime except the Chinese New Year vacation.
I think you take the plane to fly to HK is the best way, when you arrive HK, you may book a hotel, you can take a bus to through the HK and China Customs, we will send our driver to pick you up when you pass the HK and China Customs.

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Lalaland

2008-01-13 7:06 pm

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Dear x x x

I am so glad that I can finally get a chance to meet you in person!

My name is x x x.
In the upcoming month we will have a long weekend vacation, because it is the Chinese New Year!

You can come visit us anytime you like except during the Chinese New Year vacation.
I think the best way is for you to take a plane and fly to Hong Kong.

When you arrived Hong Kong, you can stay at the hotel that you booked ahead of time. After that you can also take a bus to travel Hong Kong and China Customs We will have our driver to pick you up when you pass by the Hong Kong and China Customs. Have a great trip!

* I tried not to change too much of your original/personal style. I only changed some wordings. It's a good start for you, keep trying, you will get better as you write more. Your meaning/sentence structures are already quite good. Keep it up!

Hope that helps.

參考: myself

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