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I saw a beautiful angel,
She was wearing a white dress, long hair,
She has a pair of white wings.
She smiled at me,
She then led me to the kingdom of heaven.
There are a lot of angels.
I also see these angels in Changshi praise the Lord Jesus,
Here really to be a happy place.

I see a beautiful angel,
she puts on the white long skirt,
the very long hair,
she long has a pair of white the wing.
She smiles to me,
thenshe leads me to arrive the heaven,
that has very many angels.
Ialso see these angels to sing the poem to advocate Jesus,
herereally is fills the joyful place.

I see a beautiful angel,
She wears the long skirt in white and grow very much of hair,
She is long to have a pair of wing in whites.
Is she right?I smile,
Then she leads me to the Kingdom of Heaven,
There have a lot of angels.
I also see these angels being singing the poem praise great main Jesus,
Is really one here being full of is happy of place.

我看見一個美麗的天使，
I saw a beautiful Angel,

她穿白色的長裙，很長的頭髮，
She wore a long white dress with long flowing hair,

她長有一雙白色的翅膀。
She had a set of pure white wings.

她對着我微笑，
She smiled at me,

然後她帶領我到天國，
and then, she took me to heaven,

那裏有很多天使。
There was many more Angeles.

我也看見這些天使在唱詩頌讚主耶穌，
I also saw the Choir of Angels praising the Lord Jesus Christ.

這裡真的是個充滿快樂的地方。
This place truly filled with join and happiness.

* The whole passage should be in past-tense.

hope that helps!

I see a beautiful angel, she puts on the white 長裙, the very long hair, she long has a pair of white the wing. She smiles to □me, then she leads me to arrive the heaven, that □has very many angels. I also see these angels to sing the poem 頌讚 to advocate Jesus, here really is fills the joyful place.

I see a beautiful angel,
she puts on the white the long skirt, the very long hair,
she long has a pair of white wing.
She treats me to smile,
then she leads me to arrive the heaven,
there has very many angels.
I also see these angels to sing the poem to praise advocate Jesus,
here really is the fill joyful place.

I see a beautiful angel,
She wears the long skirt of white, growing very much of hair,
She is long to have a pair of whites of wing.
Is she right?I smile,
Then she leads me to the Kingdom of Heaven,
There have a lot of angels.
I also see these angels being singing the poem Song great main Jesus,
Here really is is filled with a happy place.