英文高手請進..Error Corrections

1.The bank was robbed by two men in blue.
其實冇錯 ,只是寫得不自然~ 通常會直接用in blue 表示身穿藍衣

2.I accompanied my father to the concert.
accompany 係一個及物動詞 ,不能後置介詞

3.I crossed the road.
across 係一個介詞 , 這句誤用它為動詞

4.At the end of the play the actor dies.
At the end 係一件事情/物的結局 , 所以at the end of the play 是正確
而in the end 係一段時間 / 經歷的 最後 ,
eg : In the end, the prince married the princess [ 最後,王子及公主結婚了 ]

5.I really admire you to have six week's holiday.
admire 後用to infinitive , 而應該係 six week's ,而唔係six weeks'

6.We use a very advanced computer in our office.
需要adj - advanced

7.Her advice is always good.
advice 係不可數的 ,不能加s , 用單數動詞 , 而呢一句的意思不完整 ,他的意見總是好, 意思上有d 不知所謂 ,應該講 good in 那一方面

8.I am afraid of the dark.
afraid 係adj , 這句誤用它為verb

9.I agree;do you agree too ?
agree 係一個verb , 錯句誤用它為adj

10.That tourist bus has no air-conditioners.
no 後面應為名詞 或動名詞 , air -condition 不是解空調

11.All of us did not want her to leave.
因為不知想表達的意思係咩, 所以 好難話使5使 將all of us --> Each of us
睇下句子想強調 所有人為一個個體 還是 強調 各人la

2008-01-09 20:08:00 補充：
(4) 同 (11) 不知想說是過去還是現在,不過一般冇明顯字眼表示 ,英文會用現在式(9) 英文較自然的說法是 , I agree ; do you ? 會連第2個agree 都省略

probably all correct

1.The bank was robbed by two men wearing blue shirt.
2.I accompanied with my father to go to the concert. 一齊..但冇話去,,so加go to
3.I crossed the road. 因為acrossed 唔可以加ed因為唔係verb,,係adv,,cross係verb
4.At the end of the play ,the character dies. actor 冇死
5.I really envy you having six weeks' holiday.admire係祟拜,欣賞
6.We use a very advanced computer in our office. very後是adj,要用adj去形容電腦
7.Her advices are good. 意思怪..她的勸告係經常好?
8.I am afraid of the dark.因為afraid係adj...i後用verb,,so加左am
9.I agree;do you agree? 2個verb.. 因為are you agree都係有2個verb..so用do(助動詞)
10.That tourist bus is no air-condition.

11.All of us did not want her to leave.


錯左唔好話我bad-口-'
有D我都唔係好識 ..

3. supposed I crossed the road there is a word acrossed but it was not for this use
4.died not dies
8.I'm / I am not just I
9. I agree,do you agree
11.all of us don't want her to leave
these r actully simple to me I goes to International School

1.The bank was robbed by two men IN blue shirts.
2.I accompanied X my father to the concert.
3.I CROSSED the road.
4.IN the end of the play the actor dies.
5.I really ENVY you having six weeks' holiday.
6.We use a very advanceD computer in our office.
7.Her advice IS always good.
8.I AM afraid of the dark.
9.I agree;DO you?
10.That tourist bus has no air-conditionING.
11.EVERYONE of us did not want her to leave.

係唔係句句都要改GA?