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大家對於兩岸經濟關係的發展，有種強烈的恐慌感，以前是怕
台灣經濟太依賴中國大陸，現在更是怕企業都遷移到大陸去造成台灣的產業下滑。
確實，兩岸政治關係的不確定，也使得大家對台灣的經濟願景缺乏共識，也因此
難以判斷何者值得憂慮，以致於對快速的變化產生恐慌。
因此政府開放小三通,意指金馬地區與中國大陸直接通商、通航與通郵,希望對台灣經濟有所幫助,也可以促使兩岸的交流,產業移往大陸是好還是不好?在這個議題中我們也有著不同的看法:
Everybody regarding both banks economy relations development has plants the intense panic feeling, before is feared the Taiwan economy too relies on mainland China, now is feared the enterprise all migrates to the mainland creates Taiwan the industry to glide down. Both banks political relation is truly indefinite, also causes everybody to be willing the scenery to Taiwan's economy to lack the mutual recognition, also which one therefore judges to be worth the anxiety with difficulty, down to produces panic to the fast change. Therefore the government opens the small Three Contacts, Italy refers to the golden horse area and mainland China directly trades together, is open to navigation with accessible by postal communication, hoped has the help to the Taiwan economy, also may urge both banks the exchange, the industry to move toward the mainland is good or is not good? We also have the different view in this subject: