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I thought the story finally is very affected, because in competition time Brother VIOAL suddenly came back, her true status was discovered by the person, but her new school soccer group leader actually made an exception lets her go on stage the competition, result finally she and the teammate Ying field sports match.

this story was very touching, because Vioal's brother returned while the contest, her real identity has found, but her new school soccer's leader broke the tradition and let her back to continused the contest. at last, she was totally won with her teammate.

我覺得故事的最後很感動 , 因為在比賽時 VIOAL 的哥哥突然回來了 , 她真正的身份被人發現 , 但是她新學校的足球領隊卻破例讓她上場比賽 , 結果最後她和隊友嬴了場球賽。
I thought the story finally is very affected, because in competition
time Brother VIOAL suddenly came back, her true status was discovered
by the person, but her new school soccer group leader actually made an
exception lets her go on stage the competition, result finally she and
the teammate Ying field sports match.

I am touched by the ending of the story. At the end of the story, VIOAL's elder brother came back suddenly during the football match, VIOAL's true status so then was revealed. However, the football team's leader of the new school made an exception to let her continue the match. Finally, her team won the match.

2008-01-08 00:22:30 補充：
改一改...during the football match, her real identity so then was revealed/discovered......Surprisingly, the coach of the new school's football team made an exception for her to continue matching in the game. Eventually, her team won the match.重有想問既係...你係咪想講VIOLA?

I thought the story finally is very affected, because in competition time Brother VIOAL suddenly came back, her true status was discovered by the person, but her new school soccer group leader actually made an exception lets her go on stage the competition, result finally she and the teammate Ying field sports match.

This looks like summary for the movie "She's the Man" with Amanda Byrnes.

我覺得故事的最後很感動
I find the end of the story quite touching/moving.
OR I am quite touched/moved by the story in the end.
感動=touched/moved; moved>touched
我很感動=I am quite touched/moved
但同interested, interesting一樣, 用係物件上就要將ed變成ing
這個故事很令人感動=The story is quite touching/moving

因為在比賽時 VIOAL 的哥哥突然回來了 , 她真正的身份被人發現 但是她新學校的足球領隊卻破例讓她上場比賽
This is because even though her brother suddenly came back during the game and her real identity was revealed, the soccer team of Viola's new school made the exception of allowing her to play in the game. In the end, her team and her won the match.

I thought the end of the story very moved, because the elder brother of VIOAL suddenly came back while competing, her real identity is found, but her football leader of the new school lets her play exceptionally , the result is Ying a ball match of she and teammate finally.