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2008-01-07 6:14 am
Good morning,today I will tell you my create a uniform.This uniform is wear in winter and this uniform is girl uniform.This uniform and a lomg,white shirt,a deep blue tie,a checked jumper and in jumper has a stamp,and has long deeep blue dress.The dress and shirt is no together.

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2008-01-07 4:10 pm
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Good morning, today I will tell you my creation of a uniform. This female uniform is designed to wear in the winter. This uniform HAS a LONG, white shirt, a deep blue tie, a checkered jumper and in a jumper that has a stamp, and also has long DEEP blue dress.The dress and shirt is not pieced together.

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hope that helps.
參考: myself
2008-01-07 6:25 am
Good morning,I will tell you my creation of uniform today.
this uniform is wear in winter and it is for girl.
This uniform have a long,white shirt,a deep blue tie.It also have a checked jumper.The jumper has a stamp,and a long deep blue dress.
Finally,the dress and the shirt will not use together
你既文法.................唉
參考: me
2008-01-07 6:19 am
冇錯字!!!

岩曬!!!@_@


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