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My living area.
I live in Long Ping. There are three parks. When i was in primary school, I always play in the park with my friends, we had lots of fun.
There are two supermarkets, so we can buy our daily products easily.
There is a downtown street, we can buy lots of food there. Also there is dinergarden, primary school and secondary school around my living area.
There are many restaurants around too, so my friends and i can have lunch and dinner in the restaurants.
There are many trees around. The air is fresh and when I breath in, i feel comfortable. I like my living place. I can do lots of thing with it.

"My living area"題目
I live in Long Ping.
There are consummate equipment.
There are three parks, two supermarkets, a downtown street, schools, restaurants...
When I am in primary school, I always play in the parks with my friends. We are very happy.There are many trees in the parks,they made yhe air refreshing.
We can buy many types of things in those supermarkets. I think it is very convenient.
We can buy a lot of food in downatreet.