Improve this sentence

2008-01-03 12:51 pm
Please improve the following sentence:

In fact, I have already completed classes with the same level in my high school in Hong Kong.
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Please translate the following sentence into english 香港同美國GA education system 好唔同

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2008-01-03 3:14 pm
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Please improve the following sentence:

In fact, I have already completed classes with the same level in my high school in Hong Kong.
Basically, the grammar and the structure of your sentence are correct, but I think that will become better when you change into:
In fact, I have already completedl all the classes with the same level of my high school in Hong Kong.
Hope it helps you
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參考: myself
2008-01-03 10:53 pm
In fact, I have already completed classes of the same level at my Hong Kong high school.
參考: me
2008-01-03 4:56 pm
In fact, the classes in high school what I have already completed have the same level in Hong Kong.
2008-01-03 1:27 pm
In fact, I have already completed classes with the same level in my high school in Hong Kong.

In fact, I have already completed many classes within the same level AT my high school back in Hong Kong.

* nothing much to change, you have a well written beginning, just a few words change and you are ready to go.

hope that helps.
參考: myself


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