改錯處....English

2008-01-03 5:39 am

問題1:do you like to decorate your house or school or christmas?why or why not?

I like to decorate my house ,it is because I like hong kong christmas atmosphere and to accept the christmas present. Christmas trees may be decorated with lights and ornaments.The Christmas tree is often explained as a Christianization of pagan tradition and ritual surrounding the Winter Solstice, which included the use of evergreen boughs, and an adaptation of pagan tree worship

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用戶23256

2008-01-03 6:05 am

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I like to decorate my house BECAUSE I like THE ATMOSPHERE IN HONG KONG CHRISTMAS and RECEIVING the Christmas present. Christmas tree may decorate with lights and ornaments. it often explained as a Christianization of pagan traditionand ritual surrounding hte Winter Solstice, which INCLUDES the USES of evergreen boughs and an adaptation of pagan tree worship.

*** the caps. letters are corrected
1."it is because" is used at the opening of the sentence
2. to receive sth. is better than to accept sth., and we use gerund (-ing) more than infinitive (to do)
and some minor mistakes, plz feel free to ask me

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