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2008-01-03 12:23 am
susan看見這個可愛的機械貓
情不自禁地把它買回家了
這個機械貓會跟別人打招呼
susan十分喜愛這個機械貓
第二天,susan把它放進書包裏,帶回學校
當susan正在上課的時候
機械貓突然跳了出來
最後,可憐的機械貓就給老師沒收了.

回答 (7)

2008-01-03 12:35 am
✔ 最佳答案
Susan saw this lovable mechanical cat
unrestrainedly to buy back it family this mechanical cat to be able to hit with the others greets
susan extremely to like this mechanical cat
second days, susan admits it the school bag , bring back to the school
cat suddenly jumped came outwhen susan was attending class the time mechanical cat suddenly jumped came out
finally, the pitiful mechanical cat gave teacher to confiscate
2008-01-03 12:43 am
Susan saw this cute mechanical cat, so she bought it home.
The mechanical cat can say "Hi" to human that Susan never seen before, so Susan love this mechanical cat.
On the second day, Susan put it into her school bag and brought it back to school.
However, when susan was learning in classroom, the mechanical cat jumped out suddenly. Finally, the poor mechanical cat was caught by Susan's teacher....

in the paragraph........tense really sepends on u.....i dun know what're u write for......
so, u can change it......(I'm using past tense)...............there's a lot of words u can choose..............just like
cute=lovely
If it's a compo writing, u may use more beautiful woords......just like making the reader feel they're watching a film............hope i can help u.............no need to use so many difficult words.........a simple and stable compo can always get a good marks.........
參考: ME
2008-01-03 12:37 am
Susan saw a cure electric cat then buy it. This cat could say hello to everyone so that Susan liked it very much. the next day,Susan put it in the schoolbag and went to school with it.suddenly,it was jumping from her bag in the lesson. As a result, miss confiscated it.
2008-01-03 12:36 am
Susan saw this lovely mechanical cat and cannot resist the temptation to buy it home.
This cat can greet people and Susan loves it very much.
The next day, Susan puts it in her school bag and took it to school. While Susan has her lessons the mechanical cat suddently jumps out. Finally the poor mechanical cat was confiscated by the teacher.
參考: Self
2008-01-03 12:34 am
Susan see this cute robot cat then she buy it home. This robot cat can say hello to people.She likes it very much .Another day, Susan put it in her school bag and bring to school.When Susan is having a lesson, robot cat suddenly jump out. Finally the poor robot cat give the teacher take away.
參考: my brother
2008-01-03 12:33 am
Susan saw this cute cat, she brought it back home.
This cat can say hi to you!
Susan love this cat.
The next day,Susan put it in her bag and brought it to school.
When Susan is studying,it suddenly jumped out.
Finally, the cat are given to the teacher.
2008-01-03 12:29 am
Susan saw this lovable mechanical cat unrestrainedly to buy back it
family this mechanical cat to be able to hit with the others greets
susan extremely to like this mechanical cat second days, susan admits
it the book bag , bring back to the school when susan was attending
class the time mechanical cat suddenly jumped came out finally, the
pitiful mechanical cat gave teacher to confiscate
參考: Yahoo! 聰明筆


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