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My name is May. I am 11 years old. I live in H.K. with my family. I study at ABC Primary School. I am in class 6 A.

My favourite subject is music because I enjoy (listening) pop music and singing. I (am) good at playing violin. I always try my best at everything I do.

(On) Saturday(s), I learn to play violin. (On) holiday, I go to the park and play badminton with my family - 習慣用present tense.

My name is May. I am 11 years old. I live in H.K. with my family. I study at ABC Primary School. I am in class 6 A.

My favourite subject is music because I enjoy listening pop music and singing (songs). I (AM) good at playing the violin. I always try my best at everything I do.

In Saturday, I learn to play the violin. In holiday, I go to the park and play badminton with my family.

2008-01-04 18:21:27 補充：
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My name is May. I am 11 years old. I live in H.K. with my family. I study at ABC Primary School. I am in class 6 A.

My favourite subject is Music because I enjoy listening to pop music and singing songs. I good at playing violin. I always try my best to do everything.

On Saturday, I learn to play violin. On holiday, I go to the park and play badminton with my family.

My name is May. I am 11 years old. I live in H.K. with my family. I study at ABC Primary School. I am in class 6 A.

My favourite subject is music because I enjoy listing(listening) pop music and singing (delete -- a song). I (am) good at playing violin. I always try my best at everything I do.

In (On) Saturday(s), I (delete -- will) learn to play violin. In holiday(s), I (delete -- will) go to the park and play badminton with my family.