英文文法..救下我..幫我修下.

this book is "TALKED" about Scrooge and his amazing christmas

Scrooge is avaricious, misanthropic and heartless showing "THAT" no feeling for the
Christmas spirit

After he "MET' the ghost of his friend Marley,
he "SAW MANY" visions of his past, present and future that inspire him to become a zealously kind and amiable individual who sends a turkey to his clerk Bob Cratchit and gives to Christmas charities generously.

he she it + s + = she likes

THE book is about Scrooge and his amazing christmas.

The main characterS ARE Scrooge and Marley.

Scrooge WAS avaricious, misanthropic and heartless. HE WAS NONCHALANT TOWARD CHRISTMAS AND KNEW NOTHING ABOUT ITS spirit.

ONE DAY the ghost of his friend Marley GAVE SCROOGE the ABILITY TO SEE HIS OWN past and future.

IT LATER inspireD him to become a zealous and amiable individual.

HE BECAME SO KIND THAT HE senT a turkey to his clerk Bob Cratchit and CONTRIBUTED to Christmas charities generously.

OK嗎?你用d咁唔常用ge字。misanthropic你都識。我盡量keep番你原本咁樣，但係要留意part of speech，句子太長你自己都混淆。:)

Scrooge is avaricious, misanthropic and heartless as he shows no feeling of the Christmas spirit.

.....he sees VISION (no 's')....