I'm a Chinese student who is learning English language.
I wrote a poem in English,
but I 'm afraid there should have been severar mistakes in it.
would you please help me to check and make it better?
Much thanks! Sincerely!
OUR SONG - Written for the years to come
Since this ancient time,
we are wrirting our Auld Lang Sung,
How can we remenber,
when time has passed our years to come?
Every day we see you and me,
And tomorrow we don't know what will be.
Just wish us a bright future,
And we know we'll again come here.
She is Michelle a pretty girl,
He is Cupid a naughty ked.
Their youth won't wait for them,
They just to promise to keep their Love.
PS. THIS poem is written for I and my GF,
maybe we are going to different universities,
but we hope we can keep our love forever!
Oh, Michelle, Love you so much!
Always praying fou you!