English: Grammer Correctness

2007-12-30 10:12 pm
Dear Writing Experts, pls advise whether the following bullet point grammer is correct.


. Intercommunicate and Interact writing skills with Dr. Eye’s members and join its activities.

回答 (3)

2007-12-31 4:34 am
✔ 最佳答案
Below is the revised sentence for your reference:
Welcome to intercommunication using interactive writing with Dr.Eye's members and your joining in/your participation in its activities.


Hope this helps!
2008-01-02 9:18 am
dear admin:
you is bad!
2007-12-30 10:56 pm
Not a complete sentence due to missing the subject, but still okay. Good to go.


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