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Linda, Ben and I visited Ngon Ping 360 this afternoon. We took cable car to Ngong Ping Village. We watched shows and bought something in there. We also went to see Buddha and Pon Lin Monastery. Both of us have brought our camers. Ben and Linda took many good photos but I think that the quality of my photos were better than them.

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In the afternoon,Liunda,Ben and I visited Ngong Ping 360.We went there by the cable car to Ngong Ping Village.We watched shows and went shopping there.We also went sightseeting to the Buddha and the Po Lin Monastery.We all brought our cameras.Ben and Liunda took some good photos but my photos were better !