續寫一個故事

2007-12-29 3:34 am
續寫故事

這天,我放學回家,急不及待地打開衣櫥,打算好好裝扮一下以出席晚上的化裝舞會。在翻動衣物時,赫然看見一件紫紅色的斗篷!取在手裏,光滑的緞質布料予人舒適的感受。我忍不住把它披到肩上....(幫我作下文la...)(比d意見,等我參考)

回答 (3)

2007-12-30 8:40 pm
.....當我正在披到肩上的時候,我家的小貓xx突然撲向我,頑皮的牠不斷.........(你自己諗埋佢)
參考: 旁觀者
2007-12-29 3:44 am
sorry,l can't use the chinese to write,l only can use english...

突然,my mother open my door and say' you can't wear this 斗篷! it is my friend____ Mary.So,she take out two beautiful clothes to me.l very happy.In 晚上,l wear my mother give me this wo clothes to 出席晚上的化裝舞會.
2007-12-29 3:39 am
突然我die o左~~
參考: me


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