該校. 請大家幫忙諗諗. 謝.............
更新1:
可否給我英文辦辨. tks..............
更新2:
有無d由學生自己寫的簡單信, 介紹自己點解喜愛這學校. tks
急..........有關面試英文信
回答 (2)
2007-12-29 4:59 pm
✔ 最佳答案
寫英文面試信點解揀個間學校
首先你梗係寫dear principle / school
之後就要寫 話你個女揀呢間學校because .....
可以話校風好純樸.. 師資優良..學生純品, 學業成績好突出
如果有理據 證明下點解間學校d學生成績咁好就perfect
點樣搵到呢d數據呢? 就係上下教統局睇下有冇..或者升中個陣會派本野介紹間學校d成績點架嘛 咁樣有數據支持會令間學校覺得你有做定功課 清楚學校咁就會俾位你既機大d
also 你可以寫下學校有咩特色.. 有d學校特別有d唔知咩gym room架..咁樣可以free 咁令學生去做運動... 或者有d sch既hall好特別..有兩層 好似睇concert咁..你又可以寫下...
或你可以寫下該校既課外活動特色係點 有冇d出面學校好少有既act.
多唔多呀... 咁樣都得架
之後最後你可以話希望貴校會收自己個女 因為個女好想入貴校...beacause貴校點點點點..首尾呼應咁...
唔好讚得太誇張..有理據支持會仲好
係你個女寫定家長寫??
我入f1 時都唔洗寫..不過我有interview..then會見principle...
希望你個女入到心儀中學
參考: 自己
2007-12-31 1:41 am
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We are writing to apply for an admission opportunity for our son, Tom xxxxxxx, to your good school. Tom is now studying in xxxxxxxPrimary School. Like most parents in Hong Kong, we are facing a challenge in selecting a suitable secondary school for our son. We have visited your school during the school open day in March. We are impressed by the students academic achievements & the confidence shown in their demonstration of the result of their hard work. Surprisingly, Tom, just a primary five student showed his interest in participating in the various games arranged by your students. When we left your school, Tom told us that he has decided to try his best to get into ABC Secondary School.
From March till now, Tom has been working on his own initiative and he did prove his desirability of becoming your student. Not only did he get a remarkable result for the school examination, he also managed to obtain a reference letter from his Principal. We therefore enclose his schools academic reports and the said reference letter for your consideration and hope that you would return us with an application form and grant Tom an opportunity for interview.
Thank you for your kind attention and in case you need further information, please give us a call at 9999999(Father) or 96666666 (Mother).
Unquote
This is my composition and I used for my sons application
--------------------------------------------------我是一條分隔線-------------------------------------------------------
唔止100字
不過我剩係搵到呢篇-0-
好多學校都唔限字數喎
不過唔好太長就得~
希望幫到你
We are writing to apply for an admission opportunity for our son, Tom xxxxxxx, to your good school. Tom is now studying in xxxxxxxPrimary School. Like most parents in Hong Kong, we are facing a challenge in selecting a suitable secondary school for our son. We have visited your school during the school open day in March. We are impressed by the students academic achievements & the confidence shown in their demonstration of the result of their hard work. Surprisingly, Tom, just a primary five student showed his interest in participating in the various games arranged by your students. When we left your school, Tom told us that he has decided to try his best to get into ABC Secondary School.
From March till now, Tom has been working on his own initiative and he did prove his desirability of becoming your student. Not only did he get a remarkable result for the school examination, he also managed to obtain a reference letter from his Principal. We therefore enclose his schools academic reports and the said reference letter for your consideration and hope that you would return us with an application form and grant Tom an opportunity for interview.
Thank you for your kind attention and in case you need further information, please give us a call at 9999999(Father) or 96666666 (Mother).
Unquote
This is my composition and I used for my sons application
--------------------------------------------------我是一條分隔線-------------------------------------------------------
唔止100字
不過我剩係搵到呢篇-0-
好多學校都唔限字數喎
不過唔好太長就得~
希望幫到你
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