我想找人改我篇文!!好easy的!~

He was very hungry ,because he didn't eat lunch at school,so when he came home he opened the refrigerator as fast as he can.But all the food was uncooked , at that time,he remebered that he saw a TV programme yesterday.It taught a delicouse dish. So he decided to cook that delicous food .Finally,he finished his frist time cooking !He was so happy at that time!~
唔好意思啊，我可能改得太多啦，希望你唔好見怪！
不過你呢篇文都寫得唔錯啊＾＾！！
rock on!!

He was very hungry because he didn't have his lunch. When he went home, he opened the refrigertor at once. But all the food was uncooked. Suddenly, he remembered that he had watched a TV show that about cooking delicious food. So he decided to follow the show to cook. Finally, he finished his first cooking! He felt very happy!

He was very hungry because he did not eat lunch at school, so when he returned home, he opened the refrigerator as fast as he could. However, all the food was not cooked. At that time, he remembered that a TV show about cooking, in which a cook had taught others how to make a delicious dish, so he decided to cook as the the chef shown in the TV programme. Finally, he finished his first cooking. He was so happy at that time.

He was very hungry ,because he didn't eat lunch and something at school,so that he came home he opened the refrigerator as fast and he can,but all the food was uncooked.At this time,he remebered watched the t.v shown about cooking ,at thist shown about cook had taught others to cook a delicious food ,so he decided to cooked the delicous food that the cooked taught in the t.v shown,then he finally finished his frist time cooking the end.He was very happy at this time.

He was very hungry because he didn't have lunch at school. So, when he came home, he opened the refrigerator as fast as he can but all the food was uncooked. At that time, he remembered that a TV programme about cooking. At that show, a cook taught people to cook a delicious meal, so he decided to cook the delicous meal which the cook taught in the TV programme. Finally, he finished his frist time cooking!
He was so happy at that time!