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In this year, whether there are things you want but have not gotten? If yes, I am happy for you. (恭喜 = Congratulations) Otherwise (If not), keep up your hard work.
In the past year, I have been very busy with my work and study at school. I have been studying without sleep, shower, shampoo and going home for two days. I still had to work afterwards. I want to give up since I am not happy. I want to do a lot of things (think? see to be won by bunch??)

咁好D嗎？
In this year, thing and the end wanted are got! Have (congratulations! ),(do not have, continued making great efforts) must cross in the past one years (busy with green, tired, tense(often have an examination) Very busy with green every day, is busy doing over again, is busy returning to and studying, busy with? Practise, deal with the examination, have not sleep for two days in succession, has not washed hair, has not gone home (in the dormitory) Subdue reading openly and prepare for the examination, go to work, very tired, very tired. Want to give up very much. Seem to be won by bunch? ,Assorted?Can't complete either, the thing missed or given up wanting sometimes is really very unhappy!

2007-12-27 16:51:31 補充：
Can& #39;t=Can'tI am sorry!

今年裡,有沒有想要的東西而又末得到呢!有<恭喜!>,<沒有,繼續努力>
過去一年裡，過得<忙綠、疲倦、緊張(經常考試)
每天都很忙 綠,忙於返工,忙於返學,忙於温習,應付考試,曾連續兩天沒睡覺，沒洗頭，沒回家(在宿舍)通消讀書準備考試，還要上班，很倦、很倦.很想放棄。好象被束博着，什麽也做不成，有時會錯過或放棄想要的東西，真的很不開心!

In does this year, have the thing which wants but also end to obtain!
Has < congratulates! > < Does not have, to continue to try hard > in
the past year, crosses busily < green, weary, anxious (frequently
takes a test) very busily every day green, is busy with doing over, is
busy with returning study, is busy with □the custom, deals with the
test, once continuously two days have not slept, have not washed hair,
have not gone home (in dormitory) pass disappear study prepare to take
a test, but also need to go to work, very tired, are very tired Very
wants to give up. Resembles is tied abundantly □, is assorted
□also makes, sometimes can miss the thing which or the giving up
wants, very is really unhappy!

Do you have things that you want this year but still have not received? If so, congregulation! If not, keep working on it.

The past year, the exams have been keeping me busy. I felt very tired and tense. I'd been busy day in and day out: work, school, study, preparing for the exams. One time, I went on without sleep for two days, didn't wash my hair, and didn't go home. I just stayed in the dormitory to study and prepare for the exams. On top of that, I have to work. I am really tired and drained. I really want to give up. I feel like being tied up. I could not accomplish anything. So many times, I missed the opportunities to get the things that I want. Other times, I gave up them up! I am very unhappy!