履歷表的修改

2007-12-27 5:57 pm

more not smort and like internet my wife it vannam have a girl chind in school i 33 year for in63 bont chinease year 1.19 now i i in find work in computer after go to there and your friend toghter go to work my name is jang so i now not have work every at home i not but news peper i us in computer in short so not in time in friee i like read some time i write mail to my friend and go to talk room and my friend i need a work so please talk i can works a new 請問這篇有甚麼要修改的地方麻煩幫小弟看一下這是104的英文自傳

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我是說我今年33歲有一個小孩我每天在家希望能和你們一起工作我需要工作請告訴我新的工作而且我都是上網在找有時我會寫一些郵件我用電腦找工作我太太是越南人我喜歡閱讀

回答 (8)

[匿名]

2008-01-01 2:27 pm

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(I decoded this content. -- I am a "Code Talker". I live in the area close to US Navajo Native American tribe. Did you hear "Code Talker" story in World War II? I'm kidding. Forget it.)

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My name is Jan So. I was born in 1963. My age is 33. ( 以上則一即可 ) I have a happy family. My wife is a Vietnamese. I have a daughter.

I need a job right now. (甚麼工作? ) I really hope your company give me a job opportunity. ... (你能作甚麼? 希望找甚麼? ) I have experience in ... ... I can do ... ... I am familiar with ... ... I am good in computer related jobs.

I like reading all kind of books. (Read what? )

I usually look for jobs on Internet.

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[匿名]

2008-01-02 1:24 am

I am 33 years old and I pormise that I will work hard if I can get this job. I worked for 你寫中文我幫你打好了：履利表別這樣打說你的優點或經歷
家裡形況不用說謝啦

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[匿名]

2007-12-28 10:58 am

這應該是寫了中文，然後放到翻譯網站後的成果。
我試過"逐字"翻譯，果然稍微看懂了！

老兄，你也幫幫忙，連中文也寫成這樣.....唉～

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2007-12-27 10:50 pm

你這樣無從改起不如把中文放上來幫你整修門面

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[匿名]

2007-12-27 8:32 pm

我看這篇沒人回答我真的很想幫你不過這一篇錯字太多文法也很誇張的怪完全不曉得你想說什麼想幫也都下不了手

it doesn't make sense at ALL.....

我會勸你寫一篇中文版醬也比較好猜你要表達的意思!

以本人在美國18年的經驗這樣的文章真的難倒我了~ 若另有高人可以解答我在這說先聲"佩服"!

參考: 自己

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[匿名]

2007-12-27 7:05 pm

看不懂

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[匿名]

2007-12-27 6:18 pm

那該怎麼辦又是必備的寫不好又容易被看出孤陋寡文

2007-12-28 12:16:14 補充：
謝謝大家幫我解決台灣人真的好可愛可是這是我自己打的所以很簡單
最少我自己覺得這不是用翻的

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[匿名]

2007-12-27 6:05 pm