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I'm xxx,I've been working in this company more than 6 years. I'm an assisatant clerk. I always feel my knowledge is not good engough when I were facing customers. I want to learn more computer skills to satisfy my existing job requirement.

This course would provide more computer knowledge. For example, Word,Excel....etc, I'll be more confident when I have the computer problems again!

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I'm xxx, I have been working in this company as an assistant clerk for more than 6 years. I sometimes feel I am not capable of dealing with customers when it comes to using computer. Therefore I really want to learn more computer skills in order to perfect my job performance.

I always bear our company's motto in mind: to be premier. I understand that we are to work hard to become the most respectable, if not the largest, computer company in HK. As a staff member of this professional company, I always wonder how we can achieve enhanced customer satisfaction and respect.

We have just changed new computers, and therefore it would be best if we can learn some more essential computer knowledge so as to handle them well. This course can enable us with a better understanding of the new computers, and thus increasing our, and ultimately the company's, competitive edge. Besides ,this course would provide me with other computer skills, such as how to use Word, Excel and so on. I believe I can be more confident in dealing with customers after taking the course.