English - Grammer Correctness

寫英文愈簡單簡好，愈短愈好，意思要精簡，因此唔好用幾個字去講一個字， not very stong and solid 應改用 weak。

寫作技巧唔可以直譯成 writing technique，應該係 writing skill, technique 最好用來形容複雜的技巧，如 management technique, operation technique.

技巧係 feel 唔到的，所以唔好用 feel，改用 find。

insufficient 通常用來形容物品，e.g. The food was insufficient for our needs. 唔會用來形容技巧，應改用唔夠熟練 - not proficient。

全句最好改為﹕
I am weak in this kind of writing skill. I find that I am not very proficient in it.

這答案未必是最好，其他人請指教。

2007-12-24 23:22:12 補充：
我覺得你過份直譯中文成英文，應該多靈活運用。睇多d同讀多d英文便成。

2007-12-27 00:00:14 補充：
I am not proficiency in this writing skill and I need to learn more.

很好呀，好暢順，進步得很快喔﹗

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