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2007-12-25 1:34 am
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Chinese new year 5 day 4 night Tokyo tour

Do you wat to have a good Chinese new year holiday ??
if you want ,,you can join our 5 day 4 night Tokyo tour
we will guide you to play in tokyo and shopping ,, only
need "$3999" ,,five people only need "15000",,is it very cheap ?
yes ,,of course !!~~

have a good holiday

THANK YOU ~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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2007-12-25 1:42 am
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Chinese New Year 5- day- 4- night Tokyo tour

Do you want to have a good and enjoyable Chinese New Year holiday ??
if you do ,,you should join our 5 -day- 4- night Tokyo tour
we will guide you to play and go shopping in Tokyo,, it costs only
"$3999& quot; ,,five people only need "15000& quot;,,it is very cheap, isn't it ?

enjoy your good holiday


我唔知"$3999& quot; ,,five people only need "15000& quot 係咩...幫你唔到><"
2007-12-25 2:18 am
Chinese New Year Five Day and Four Night Tokyo Tour

Would you like to have a good Chinese New Year holiday?
If you would like to have , you should join our Five Day and Four Night Tokyo Tour.
We will guide you to play and shopping in Tokyo, only
need &quot;$3999&quot;,five people only need &quot;15000&quot;,is it very cheap, isn&#39;t it?
Yes,of course !

Come to enjoy a good holiday!

我唔知&quot;$3999&quot;&quot;同&quot;15000&quot;&quot;係想講咩---help唔到你,sorry&gt;&lt;&quot;
2007-12-25 1:48 am
Don&#39;t {5day4night}廣東話英文,自己想想點改
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