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2007-12-19 6:38 am
My brother is john and he is very naughtily. He can do many terrible things.
One day, he went to our cousin’s home. But he ran and ran, he broke every things!
The other time, we went to buy some food. He stole the sweets and ate them once!
After that two time, mother said he just went away with her.

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2007-12-19 6:45 am
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My brother is john and he is very naughtily.
>My brother is John and he is very naughtily.

He can do many terrible things.
>He always do many terrible things.

After that two time, mother said he just went away with her.
>( I don't understand!可否給中文解釋?)

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2007-12-19 8:31 am
my borther,john, is very naughty. he like making terrible things.
For example.last time, we were at our consin;s home. he kept running around at the house and mess up all the things.
for another experience, we went shopping for food. he stole some sweets and ate it all
這據不懂你的意思..
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2007-12-19 8:00 am
i suggest below for your reference :
I HAVE A BROTHER CALL JOHN , HE IS A TROUBLE MAKER .
ONE DAY WHEN WE TAKE HIM TO OUR COUSIN'S HOME , HOWEVER HE NEVER STOP RUNNING EVERYWHERE AND HAVE BROKE EVERY THINGS ....
FOR THE NEXT TIME , WHEN WE WERE BUYING OUR ( DINNER) , HE STOLE SOME SWEETS AND ATE IMMEDIATELY ........ EVEN MOTHER TOOK HIM OUTSIDE , HE NEVER STAY TOGETHER ......
2007-12-19 6:47 am
My brother is john . He is a naughty guy. He can make things terrible .
One day, he went to cousin"s house. He ran around and broke every things!
And when we went out to buy some food, he stole the sweets and ate them all!
After that, mother said he just went away with her.
參考: me...........


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