16th December,07 Suday cloudy
This moring, my mother and I went to Shaton to buy a textbook.the textbook was expansive very much,but this book was fun
In afternoon, We went to Aerdeen ate seafood, the seafood was yummy very much.
At night , We went to home.
Today , I was so happy.
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2007-12-19 2:46 am
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2007-12-19 2:53 am
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16th December,07 Sunday CloudyThis morning,my mother and I went to ***** to buy a textbook. It was very expensive but it was fun.In the afternoon, we went to Aberdeen to have seafood. It was very tasty.At night,we went home. Today I am so happy.
2007-12-19 19:43:51 補充：
3rd line--->it was funny.
參考: myself
2007-12-19 9:01 pm
16th December,07 Suday cloudy
This moring, my mother and I went to ***** to buy a textbook.The textbook was very expansive,but the book was funny.
In the afternoon,we went to Aerdeen to eat seafood, the seafood was very yummy.
At night ,we back home at **:** p.m.
I was very happy.
This moring, my mother and I went to ***** to buy a textbook.The textbook was very expansive,but the book was funny.
In the afternoon,we went to Aerdeen to eat seafood, the seafood was very yummy.
At night ,we back home at **:** p.m.
I was very happy.
2007-12-19 6:22 am
16th December,07 Suday cloudy
In the moring, my mother and I went to ***** bought a textbook.The textbook was very expansive ,but that book was fun.
In the afternoon, We went to Aerdeen ate some seafood, the seafood was very delicious.
At night , We went back to my home.I think today I was so happy.
In the moring, my mother and I went to ***** bought a textbook.The textbook was very expansive ,but that book was fun.
In the afternoon, We went to Aerdeen ate some seafood, the seafood was very delicious.
At night , We went back to my home.I think today I was so happy.
參考: ME
2007-12-19 3:58 am
16th December,07 Sunday Cloudy
Mother and I bought a textbook in **** this morning. Although the book was quite expensive, it is fun to read.
We had seafood for lunch in Aberdeen this afternoon. The food was yummy and tasty.
We back home at night.
I had a very happy day.
Mother and I bought a textbook in **** this morning. Although the book was quite expensive, it is fun to read.
We had seafood for lunch in Aberdeen this afternoon. The food was yummy and tasty.
We back home at night.
I had a very happy day.
參考: MYSELF
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