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A big noisy sound came, and some big buildings were falling down. "Go away!"
Someone said. Then, I saw what was happening, an incredible giant stood in
front of me! I thought this giant could not notice me because it was
very enormous. Its height was more than that of three skyscapers!
The place where I was at, was very dangerous. So, I went to the hall trying to find
out what the giant was like. It just had one single blue eye with a funny looking.
It had none of nose, ears, and hair. I thought the giant was an old man! There were
just one eye, and a long deep scar on its face. The only normal thing that I thought was
the giant's clothes. I was surprised as it was wearing a T-shirt and a shorts.


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