英文一分鍾短講問題

If you ask me what the best birthday present I ever received , I will say that paino is the best birthday present. There are few reasons . First of all, This present was my parents giving me. They safed the money hard every month to buy it.In addition, I like the piano very much since it can produce melody.What's more when I was tired or sad, I played the paino so that I can relax or cooling down myself. According above reasons, I think paino is the best birthday present I ever received. That all I want to say.Thank you for your listening.

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