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My favorite shopping centre is Citiplaza. It is located in Tai Koo Shing. We can go there by bus or MTR so it is convenient to go there. There are many floors and it is large. There is a large food court called ‘Food Fair’ and they sell different kinds of food such as Japanese food, Thai food etc. We can enjoy our meal there. There is also a large variety of shops such as shoes shop, toys shop, stationary shop and clothes shop etc. The clothes shops there sell many fashion and modern clothes. There is a large department store called ‘Apita’ and we can buy many different kinds of stuff there. Also, there is an ice-skating rack and we can go ice-skating with our family. On the other hand, there is a cinema and we can watch movies there.
I like this shopping centre because it is large and although it is a bit old, it is still very clean there. Sometimes I go ice-skating, watch movies or go shopping with my family and friends I like this shopping center very much.


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