Grammar

Communication

For those of you who would like to have a greater impact on around you, I will show you how to do it.
First of all, using body language can improve your communication skill. For examples, using more gesture have more attractive to attract other people paying more attention to you.

2007-12-17 19:48:42 補充：
For those of you who would like to have a greater impact (唔要on同those,語法不通)around you, I will show(唔要help,兩個verb唔會放在一齊) you how to do it.

2007-12-17 19:48:51 補充：
First of all, using body language can (唔要be,唔係passive)improve your communication skill. For examples, using more gesture have more attractive to attract other people paying more attention to you(look at you指望住你,我估你想講吸引人注意你).

Communication

For those of you who would like to have a greater impact on those people around you, I would hepl you to do it.
First of all, using body language could improve your communication skill. For example,
using more gestures becasue that becomes more attractive when other people look at you.