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Maybe we really cannot start it yet because there are many lure around you. If you do not want we have a further relationship, please do not treat me like this! I'm afraid I will make an illusion again. I can be a generous person in everything. However, mental side, I cannot control my arbitrariness. I can't accept my boyfriend to treat other girls very well.
It is easy to let me to lose the sense of safe from you. If you really love her, I would not care!

We really cannot start because there are many lure around you. If you don't want to have a further relationship with me, please do not treat like this!I'm afraid of I'll make an illision again.I can be be generous to the truth.However, in emotion side,I cannot control my angriness.I can't accept my boyfriend,you,to teat other girls like treating me.
You make me loose the sense of safety from you easily.If you really love that girl,I won't care!

Maybe we could not start, because there are many lure around you. If you do not want to have a further relationship between us, please do not treat me like this! I'm afraid I have illusion again. I could be a generous person in everything. However, in emotion side, I can not control my arbitrariness. I can't accept my boy friend treating other girls good too.
It is easy for me to lose the sense of safety from you. If you really love her, I would not care!