幫我用英文打返出黎牙,唔該~急(有兩篇)

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2007-12-10 02:27:36 補充：
哥C拉
[小學級 5 級]Because the best of I a favorite activity skates, feeling is a very free because I feel Cou when I skate, and very feelings good. errors, two because ? and you need subject and verb for ", and very feelings good"

2007-12-10 02:35:48 補充：
junefung6299
[小學級 5 ]I most love the activity is an ice skating, because I thought ice skating time, the feeling is very free, is very comfortable error: "i most love", because. the feeling (what feeling?), (conjunction? FANBOYS?) is very comfortable.

2007-12-10 02:39:33 補充：
My favorite activities is skating, because I think the skating when Hou, I feel very free, very comfortable, so I liked skating. error: activities (singular), because, i feel very free (use period instead of comma), very comfortable (free and comfortable)liked (past tense)

My favorite activities is skating, because I think the skating when Hou, I feel very free, very comfortable, so I liked skating.
I remember my first visit to the skating when Hou, is a fifth-grade primary school I was excited about the difficulties and described. Playing to a formal, but I fear they will be afraid to take a fall, but so far only prior to the surplus. Playing I I would not have been able to find tight handrails, when I slip my most exciting time HOU, I fell, this time falls, I know I did not succeed.
Although this is the first time skating well short span of time, but I think that already meet very happy.

Next week will begin the examination, I find it very difficult because I am now in the third, subjects more than other grades. Opened within three months and to the examination, I have learned that most students did not understand what the teacher taught. Because teachers also very eager, but the school knowingly insufficient time, why should begin next week examination?
Although next week will begin the examination, but now I began to study, it is a bit late, but it had not yet begun. Begins tomorrow, I decided, I would first study I fully understand some of the subjects, and then have some of the major subjects, some to backs subjects, in the end we will certainly I fully understand the subjects.
To take the test on the first day, I will test because of what tomorrow will be the isothermal method to deal with what this examination

Activity that I love most to skate, because I think Hou when skating, feel very free, very comfortable. So I like skating very much. I remember I Hou when going skating for the first time, primary school 5 grade. I was at that time and excited and difficult to describe . Having arrived and played formally, but I am stricken with anxiety and fear, afraid that falls etc. once stepping on . But that thought before this is only surplus. I is it can look for urgent handrail already for a moment to play, Hou when I am most excited that I slip away, I fall, fall this time, I know that I still fail. This it skates to be though only transient time well for the first time, I feel already very satisfied and very much happy.



Will begin to have an examination next week, I feel very difficult, three in because I am now, there is more subject than other grades. And the new term begins will have an examination soon in short three months, it is said that most students can not understand what a teacher teaches. Because the teachers are very worried, the school knows perfectly well that time is insufficient, why begin to have an examination next week? Though will begin to have an examination next week, I did not begin to review until now, it is really a little late, but better than not beginning either. I decide to begin tomorrow, I will review some subjects that I do not know at all at first, then reach some main subjects, to some subjects that will carry, it must be subject that I totally know finally. Arrive first day in examination, I will because what does it do in the test warm what 's method go examination to deal with this tomorrow

I most love the activity is an ice skating, because I thought ice skating time, the feeling is very free, is very comfortable. Therefore I like the ice skating very much.
I remembered I first time go to the ice skating time, is the elementary school fifth grade. I at that time excited difficult to describe. To has played officially, as soon as I actually feel alarmed and anxious, fear tread tumble and so on. However before thinks is only unnecessary. I will play one already will have been able not to look for the tight arm rest, when I slid I was most excited, I tumbled, this time tumbled, I knew that I have not been able to succeed.
Although this first ice skating is only the good short time, but I thought that was very already satisfied is very joyful.



Will start next week then to take a test, I will think am very difficult, because I now am three, the subject must be more than other grades. Moreover begins school the short three months to take a test, I heard that the major part student cannot understand teacher to teach to be assorted. Because teachers are also very anxious, but the school knows perfectly well the time to be insufficient, why will want then to start to take a test next week?
Although the next week will then start to take a test, but I only then start the review now, indeed will be a little late, but will also feel better has not started. I will decide to start tomorrow, I first review some I completely will not understand the subject, then to some principal subjects, to the subject which some must carry, to certainly will be the subject which finally I will understand completely.
Because to the test the first day, I tomorrow will have tested the method which was assorted warm is then assorted to deal with this's test .