Please proofread the following sentences

2007-12-09 9:00 pm
14) If you wishing to amend your instructions please let us know in writing.
15) If you have any enquiry, please let us know.
16) I would like to inform that there will be a meeting at 3p.m. on Friday.
17) The selection committee will be happy discussing the matter with you.
18) We are in favour of replacing the old models with new ones and to upgrade regularly after that.
19) We should be in trouble with the management if they discover these errors.

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2007-12-09 9:11 pm
✔ 最佳答案
14) If you wish to amend your instructions, please let us know in writing.
15) If you have any inquiry, please let us know.
16) I would like to inform you that there will be a meeting at 3pm on Friday.
17) The selection committee will be happy to discuss the matter with you.
18) We are in favour of replacing the old models with new ones and to upgrade regularly from now on.
19) We will be in trouble with the management if they discover these errors.
2007-12-09 9:10 pm
14) If you WISH...
15) If you have any ENQUIRIES...
16) I would like to inform EVERYONE (YOU) that....
17) The selection committee will be happy TO DISCUSS the matter with you.
18) We are in favour of replacing the old models with new ones and UPGRADING regularly after that.
19) We COULD be in trouble with the management if they discover these errors

2007-12-12 23:39:48 補充:
15, 18 are definitely wrong...
參考: myself


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