題目一：寫有關月亮的新詩．
題目二：寫有關父母的新詩．
題目三：寫有關朋友的新詩．
以上題目選其中一條寫就得啦～唔該
幫幫我寫新詩～
2007-12-08 4:31 am
回答 (3)
2007-12-08 6:35 am
孤 人 愁 寫 詩
月 照 殘 影 字
酒 醉 春 眠 夜
難 揮 異 鄉 情
家 中 老 母 九 十 九
試 問 伴 母 有 多 久
有 情 是 貴 寶
有 錢 買 唔 到
月 照 殘 影 字
酒 醉 春 眠 夜
難 揮 異 鄉 情
家 中 老 母 九 十 九
試 問 伴 母 有 多 久
有 情 是 貴 寶
有 錢 買 唔 到
2007-12-08 4:47 am
題目一:
朦朧雲間盼新月,
憶起無數童年夢,
...(你作!!)
題目二:
小草仰臉迎太陽,
小孩依偎父母邊,
...(你作!!)
題目三：
萬金不論真友情,
真心相獻樂無窮,
...(你作!!)
朦朧雲間盼新月,
憶起無數童年夢,
...(你作!!)
題目二:
小草仰臉迎太陽,
小孩依偎父母邊,
...(你作!!)
題目三：
萬金不論真友情,
真心相獻樂無窮,
...(你作!!)
2007-12-08 4:36 am
Why... I could not have a happy moment?
it seems that every movement I made, is wrong.
Luck had gone. I am no longer that strong.
Once and again, My mood sank. I lost myself, and i don't feel well.
The sun hadn't shone, and you leave me alone
it seems that every movement I made, is wrong.
Luck had gone. I am no longer that strong.
Once and again, My mood sank. I lost myself, and i don't feel well.
The sun hadn't shone, and you leave me alone
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