我想問:Can u Help me to changes the Grammer

Mrs Lung will introduce breifly to us about the report, about which she was to make a concession before really carrying our the new retirement scheme.

Are u trying to say this? hope i've not misunderstood u~

2007-12-06 19:28:22 補充：
and, no offence, your title already has a few mistakes...i think it would be much better if u write this:can you help me to correct any grammatical mistakes in my essay/sentence?

2007-12-11 09:14:58 補充：
^..^

A brief introduction will be given to us by Mrs Lung for which a submission was to made before putting the new retirement scheme into practice.

冇改你d tense同meaning -_-
淨係將你句野變左passive