[急!] ENGLISH GRAMMER Queations

1. Submission of application letters before October will be considered.

2. We will let Lisa be in charge of researching for new lines of products, give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration and let Pat be responsible for budget control.

3. The unscrupulous employee had shredded the documents by midday.

p.s. FROM WIKIPEDIA
Parallelism is a balance of two or more similar words, phrases, or clauses.
For example:
Lacking parallelism: She likes cooking, jogging, and to read.
Parallel: She likes cooking, jogging, and reading

Lacking parallelism: The dog ran across the yard, jumped over the fence, and down
the alley he sprinted.
Parallel: The dog ran across the yard, jumped over the fence, and sprinted down
the alley.

2007-12-11 09:18:36 補充：
Why has someone felt this answer is no good?

1 Change to positive language:
Submission of application letters beyond the last day of September will be
considered.

2 Improve parallelism:
Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of products while Pat will be
in charge of budget control, we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo
for her consideration.

3 change to active voice:
The unscrupulous employee had shredded the documents by midday.

2007-12-06 13:24:48 補充：
Or you can say:2 Improve parallelism: Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of products while Pat's duty will be on budget control, we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration.