1)Improve parallelism?help me to changes the Grammer

2007-12-06 7:35 am
Improve parallelism?help changes the Grammer
Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of products ,we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration and Pat's duty is budget control.

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2007-12-06 8:30 am
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Lisa will be in charge of research about new product lines while Pat will be responsible for budget control. We shall give Jennifer our opinions on the design of our logo ,which is for her reference only.

Hope this helps!
2007-12-10 10:21 pm
this is not paralellism


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