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The Victoria park is the Hong Kong Island area biggest park, the total area amounts to 17 hectares, is equipped with the many kinds of tendencies and the static facility, now plants surpasses 5,500 tree, started in October 16, 1957 for the resident to use. The Victoria park certainly is not Victoria queen the time completes, the park original address is old Causeqay Bay takes shelter from wind the pond, was in 1951 starts to construct levels wards off makes the park. Names the park is the Victoria park, the reason is concerns with the Victoria queen's bronze statue. Time reigns which in Victoria queen (1837-1901), may say is the English matter progresses, the political situation stable famous time, steadily moved towards the democracy free new page. In 1842, Hong Kong ceded because of Opium War to England governs and rule, at that time was being Victoria queen to reign the time, she then Hong Kong will open into the commercial port. Hong Kong's harbor also therefore is called the Victoria port.

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Victoria Park is the largest park in Hong Kong Island, and has been open to citizens since 16th October, 1957. The park covers an area of about 17 hectares, within which many facilities, active or passive, are available. In present, there are more than 5500 arbors in the park.
Victoria Park was actually not built in the reign of Queen Elizabeth. It was originally a typhoon shelter known as Causeway Bay Typhoon Shelter. The park was later named as Victoria Park because of the bronze statue of Queen Elizabeth put in there.


The reign of Queen Victoria(1837 - 1907) in the Great Britain was an era of rapid advances of both living standard and material life. The political stability at the time had also brought about a firm and steady step to democracy. In 1842, at which time Queen Victoria was still in reign, Hong Kong became a colony of the Great Britain after the Treaty of Nanking was signed. The Queen decided to develop Hong Kong to become a commercial port, and the harbour of Hong Kong was named as Victoria Harbour thus.

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The "most biggest"....how could that be.... .

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The Victoria park is the Hong Kong Island area biggest park, the total area amounts to 17 hectares, is equipped with the many kinds of tendencies and the static facility, now plants surpasses 5,500 tree, started in October 16, 1957 for the resident to use. The Victoria park certainly is not Victoria queen the time completes, the park original address is old Causeqay Bay takes shelter from wind the pond, was in 1951 starts to construct levels wards off makes the park. Names the park is the Victoria park, the reason is concerns with the Victoria queen's bronze statue.
Time reigns which in Victoria queen (1837-1901), may say is the English matter progresses, the political situation stable famous time, steadily moved towards the democracy free new page. In 1842, Hong Kong ceded because of Opium War to England governs and rule, at that time was being Victoria queen to reign the time, she then Hong Kong will open into the commercial port. Hong Kong's harbor also therefore is called the Victoria port.

The most biggest park is in the Hong Kong Island --Victoria park. Its total area about 17 hectares. In there,many kinds of tendencies and the static facility had equipped. Nowaday more than 5,500 trees were planted. It had been started in October 16, 1957 for the all to use. The Victoria park certainly is not completed when Victoria queen was here. The original place is in the old Causeway Bay. It was built from 1951and used for park. To put this park as Victoria park, because the Victoria queen's bronze statue.

When it was in Victoria queen (1837-1901), we may say that England is grown up from behind and political stability, It brought to move towards the democracy pages. In 1842, Hong Kong ceded to England because of Opium War. At that time was being by Victoria queen, she let Hong Kong become into commercial port. Hong Kong's harbor therefore called as the Victoria port.