1)Changes to positive language?
Submission of application leters beyond the last day of September will no longer be considered
2)Improve parallelism?
Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of products ,we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration and Pat's duty is budget control.
3)change to active voice ?
The documents had been shredded by th unscrupulous employee by midday.
[急!] HELP me change the ENGLISH GRAMMER
2007-12-06 7:22 am
回答 (2)
2007-12-08 11:23 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Submission of application letters beyond the last day of September WILL BE REJECTED.Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of product. ON THE OTHER HAND, we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration and LAST BUT NOT LEAST, Pat will be responsible for budget control.
The unscrupulous employee HAD SHREDDED the documents by midday.
參考: Me
2007-12-06 7:29 am
1) Submission of application leters beyond the last day of September will be considered
2) Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of products , also we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration and Pat's duty is budget control.
3) The unscrupulous employee by midday had shredded the documents.
2) Lisa will be in charge of researching for new lines of products , also we will give Jennifer ideas on the design of our logo for her consideration and Pat's duty is budget control.
3) The unscrupulous employee by midday had shredded the documents.
參考: me
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