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Although Flambeau was a theif, i still like him most. I will give him a invisible robe as a present to him. If he had this robe, he could commit easily and Valentin would not catch him easily. And therefore, the story can be more exciting and transitional.

Although Flambeau was a thief, I still like him most. If I am to give him a present, I will give him an invisible robe. If he had this robe, he could commit(?) his crime more easily and Valentin would not have caught him. In this way the story would be more exciting and have more unexpected twists.

2007-12-14 19:03:26 補充：
would not HAVE caught him easily,,,