急急急!!!中一English Presentation

The gift is a box of color pens.I bought it from [a] bookshop [x that] in Chai Wan.
I will give the gift to Carol. I wrapped [the] gift with green wrapping paper because her favourite color is green. I choose this present because it is useful and Carol likes [painting] very much. Also,the box cover is Twins Star------- Carol like Twins Star [very] much. I will give her the present in [the] Christmas Eve because she [will] go to Cheung Chau [for] [camping] for some days.

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The gift is a box of colored pens.I bought it from a bookshop in Chai Wan.I will be giving it to Carol. Since her favourite color is green, I wrapped the gift with green wrapping paper. I chose this present because Carol likes to paint very much and that these colored pens may be useful to her. In addition to its usefulness, the box cover is Twins Star, cartoon characters from Sanrio. Carol like Twins Star very much. I have decided to give her this present on Christmas Eve because I will not be seeing her for a while. She will be at Cheung Chau camp.