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I had a dog.He named Bobby.My parents brought him four years before.He is now live in my aunt's home.Why he live in my aunt's home?Because two years ago,I need to change my house.But my new house is not big enough for him and i didn't have time to take care of him.So,he lives in my aunt's house.Every week,I will go to visit him and take he to stroll.
I
remember once I toke him to stroll,I only mind of my book.Then he lost.I'm very worry,I try to find him everywhere but I can't find him.So I tell my aunt.

She was very unhappy,but she didn't reprove me.Then we try to find him again in the park.At last,we found him.He is just walking beside the park.Later,I need to be careful,avoid he will lost again.

I have a dog his name called Bobby.And my parents bought he four years before,and he is living my aunt's house now.Why he is living in my aunt's house now?Because i don't have enough time to take care of my dog and also my hosue it's not big enough for my dog and my whole family so i had to move house in 2 years ago.Every week ,i will go to my aunt's house to visit my dog and take my dog for a walk.

I have a dog.It name is Bobby,my parents bought it four years before,
It is living in my aunt's home now.Why it lives in my aunt's home? It was because
two years ago.I need to change my house,but my new house is not big and I had not
time to take care for it, so it lived in my aunt's house,Everyweek,I will go to visit it and take he to stroll.

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I have a dog.His name is Bobby,my parents bought he four years before.
He's now living in my aunt's home.Why he's living in my aunt's home?because
two years ago,I need to change my house,but my new house is not big enough and I haven't
time to take care for him.So, he's living in my aunt's house,Everyweek,I goes to visit him and take him to stroll.I remember once I took him to stroll,but after that,he was get lost.I am very worry,I found him everywhere but I can't find him.So that
I told my aunt , she was very unhappy ,but she didn't reprove me and we found
him again in the park.At last,we've been found him, he's only walking beside the park .I will be more careful definitely
,avoid him lost again.

2007-12-03 20:22:09 補充：
I took him to stroll,but I only mind of my book,So that he was get lost.

I have a dog.It name is Bobby,my parents bought it for four year ago,
He is living in my aunt's home now.Why he live in my aunt's home?It was because
two years ago.I need to change my house,but my new house is not big enough and I had not time to take care for it, so, it lives in my aunt's house.Everyweek,I will go to visit he and take he to stroll.

I remember once I take he to stroll,but I only mind of my book,
so that he get lost .I am very worry,I found It everywhere but I can't find it.So that
I told my aunt , she was very unhappy ,but she didn't to reprove for me and we found
he again in the park.At last,we can found it, it only walk beside the park .Next time i
must be more careful ,avoid he is lost again.