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In addition Mr. Li can adopt the structure simplified even more, reduce company expenses, he can redistribute position even more, for example one staff may take care of odd different working categories, make staff's working efficiency and human resources improve, thus reduce hands. This makes the company have more than one working system that should be efficient.

i don't understand the way you put even more at the end of a sentence. also too many C.S.(abuse of comma). your effort counts, but please proofread it. you can't just translate it word by word.

此外李先生更可採用精簡的架構,減少公司開支,他更可重新分配職位,例如一位員工可以 <劍>顧幾個不同的工作範疇,令員工工作效率及人力資源提高,從而減少人手.這可使公司擁有一個幾更宜又有效率的工作制度.

In addition Mr. Li may use the overhead construction which simplifies, reduces the company to pay wages, he may redistribute the position, for example a staff may give a thought to several different work categories, enhances make the staff working efficiency and the human resources, thus reduced manpower This may enable the company to have several more suitable effective work routines .
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In addition Mr. Li may use the simplification the construction, reduces the company to pay wages, he may redistribute the position, for example a staff may give a thought to several different work categories, enhances make the staff working efficiency and the human resources, thus reduced manpower. This may enable the company to have a several more suitable effective work routine.
(此外李先生更可採用精簡的架構,減少公司開支,他更可重新分配職位,例如一位員工可以 <劍>顧幾個不同的工作範疇,令員工工作效率及人力資源提高,從而減少人手.這可使公司擁有一個幾更宜又有效率的工作制度.)

In addition Mr. Li may use the simplification the construction, reduces the company to pay wages, he may redistribute the position, for example a staff may gives a thought to several different work categories, enhances make the staff working efficiency and the human resources, thus reduced manpower. This may enable the company to have a several more suitable effective work routine.

In addition Mr. Lee can even adopt to simplify of structure, reduce company expenditure, he can even reallocate a post, for example an employee can
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