幫我搵呢份英文中ge錯誤!(10)

2007-12-02 2:18 am
Last Sunday was Halloween,my friend and I get(呢個不用)
many sweets.We visited more than thiety flat.My school
also had an Halloween Drama Night.Each class made made
some costumes but puton a play.It wasfun.Although I
was quite disappointing that my class didn't win any
prize,we learnt how to work well together as a team.

一行一個,急,快

回答 (7)

2007-12-02 2:35 am
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Last Sunday was Halloween. My friend and I got
many sweets.We visited over thirty flats.My school
also have had an Halloween Drama Night. Each classmate made
some costumes but puton {sorry, not understand} a play. It was fun. Although I
was quite disappointed that my class didn't win any
prize, we have learnt how to work well together as a team.
2007-12-02 3:07 am
Last Sunday was Halloween,my friend and I got
many sweets. We visited more than **thirty** **flats**. My school
also had **a** Halloween Drama Night.Each class **made**
some costumes **and** **put on** a play. It was **funny**. Although I
was quite **disappointed** that my class didn't win any
**prizes** , we learnt how to work well together as a team.

如有錯謨,請原諒

2007-12-01 19:11:04 補充:
sorry,第4行應該係 " to put on"而唔係"and put on"
參考: myself
2007-12-02 2:49 am
Last Sunday was Halloween,my friend and I get(got)
many sweets.We visited more than thiety(thirty) flat(flats).My school
also had an (a) Halloween Drama Night.Each class made
some costumes but (to) put on a play.It was fun.Although I
was quite disappointing (disappointed) that my class didn't win any
prize(prizes),we learnt how to work well together as a team.

希望幫到你. :)
2007-12-02 2:45 am
many sweets.We visited more than **thiety** (thirty) flat.My school
also had **an** (a) Halloween Drama Night.Each class made made
some costumes **but** (and) puton a play.It was fun.Although I
was quite **disappointing** (disappointed) that my class didn't win any
**prize** (prizes),we ^(had) learnt how to work well together as a team.

please replace the ** ** words with words inside the ( ).

In the 6th line, the answer should be arguable.
I would probably use a perfect tense for the last sentence to make the meaning complete if I were the one to write this passage.
And there are also old theory saying that we should use plural form instead of singular form after 'any'.

So, I would choose to correct 'prize' into 'prizes' as the best answer
as it can, somehow, be right for not using perfect tense in the last sentence.
參考: myself
2007-12-02 2:39 am
Last Sunday was Halloween,my friend and I get(呢個不用)
many sweets.We visited more than thiety(thirty) flat.My school
also had an(a) Halloween Drama Night.Each class made made(delete one made)
some costumes but(and) puton(put on) a play.It wasfun(was fun).Although I
was quite disappointing(disappointed) that my class didn't win any
prize,we learnt how to work well together as a team.
參考: 自己揾嫁!! 希望啱啦! ︿︿
2007-12-02 2:35 am
It was Halloween last Sunday,my friend and I got many sweets.
We visited more than thirty flats.
There was a programme called Halloween Drama Night in my school too.
Each class had to make some costumes and put on for the play.
It was fun.

Although I felt quite disappointed that we could not win,
we learnt how to work well together as a team.
參考: 自己
2007-12-02 2:26 am
Line 2:thiety->thirty
Line 3:an->a
Line 4:but->and
Line:5:disappointing->disappointed
Line:6:sorry,I don't know~
參考: Me


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