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To sum up, I think that research plays an important part in this assisgnment. No audience will agree with my views/opinions without a variety of supporting data. I have also learned more about importance of cooperation. Because of the limits of one's ability it is impossible for any staff inside an organization to do the job well without making cooperation with other colleagues / staff . Therefore, what's more, teamwork can help us make the work more perfect.

To summarize my assignment, I think research is the most important part because they can support my points and let the audience agree on me. I have also learnt cooperation is also important being work makes perfect with support by everyone in the organization.

To sum up this assignment, I think research is the most important because some date can support my points and make the audience agree with me. Also I have learned the importance of cooperation. Because only the organization is not enough, so we need cooperation to make the work more perfect.